Comments on Chapter 1 - Know herself

[remaha]

We have posted the first draft of Chapter 1

Link to thread containing Chapter 1 - know herself

This thread is for posting comments, corrections, new information and anything else you want to say about it.

Please note that more links will be added to the draft in due course.

We also intend to publish the Chapter on the website after FMs have had a chance to comment. The version on the website will also include photos. We may also add some to the version on the forum. Who knows?

[Clash]

Remaha, good work in putting all the various bits of info together into something readable.

A better link to Only Tease might be this:
www.onlytease.com/viewmodel.cfm?this_model_id=372&sort_type=2&show_images=16&IndexPage=11&show_galleries=11
It's a bit long but the page it links to shows three pictures from each of Aisleyne's eleven photo sets.

[maringo]

It all looks good to me. Well Done! ;D

I watched an early episode of BB7 recently and Aisleyne mentioned that she was born in Hampstead. I don't know London well, does that tally with the other information?

[Clash]

I don't know London that well either, Maringo, but it looks like Hampstead is just west of Camden and north of Regents Park, so yes, it tallies.

[remaha]

clash said:

Remaha, good work in putting all the various bits of info together into something readable.

A better link to Only Tease might be this:
www.onlytease.com/viewmodel.cfm?this_model_id=372&sort_type=2&show_images=16&IndexPage=11&show_galleries=11
It's a bit long but the page it links to shows three pictures from each of Aisleyne's eleven photo sets.

Cheers clash - link changed

[remaha]

maringo said:

It all looks good to me. Well Done! ;D

I watched an early episode of BB7 recently and Aisleyne mentioned that she was born in Hampstead. I don't know London well, does that tally with the other information?

Thanks for the Hampstead info maringo. I've added a note to the "Early years" post to reflect this. It may be that she was born at the Royal Free Hospital in Hampstead. Or maybe that's where her mum lived when Aisleyne was first born.

[Admin]

Just to say that first chapter is fantastic. Well done.

Although, we cant quote full articles on the website, just snippets with the source is ok. Unless we have permission.

[Admin]

Rem let me know when you want it posted.

Shall we put it on the word press and new my space as well?

[remaha]

admin said:

Rem let me know when you want it posted.

Shall we put it on the word press and new my space as well?

I'll PM you about it DT